Comments | altitudeandwine: BSG R/S bra snippet

altitudeandwine

BSG R/S bra snippet

Oct 15, 2005 16:20

I'm reaching the clean-up phase of my first BSG fic and I'm chucking chunks out that, while fun imagining and writing, don't really add as much to the story as I'd initially hoped.
( Like this R/A bedroom flash back drabble )

writing, char: laura roslin, writing: story, writing: drabble, fan: bsg, char: bill adama, writing: no phoenix for roslin

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twilight_mash October 15 2005, 16:31:45 UTC

*dies*

This is so awesome!

altitudeandwine October 15 2005, 23:44:12 UTC

*rushes in with oxygen*
Thanks for letting me know!

docladyblade October 15 2005, 17:18:18 UTC

"He'll see this as an invitation."

Bill choked.

"I'll help you search."

*snerk*

lovely story

altitudeandwine October 15 2005, 23:49:05 UTC

Thanks. I had great fun writing it and when it didn't fit the story it was part of anymore, it seemed a waste to delete it.

kimbari October 15 2005, 17:30:33 UTC

ROFL

Loves, loves, loves it, me!

altitudeandwine October 15 2005, 23:12:19 UTC

*sighs contentedly*
Thank you!

livilla October 15 2005, 19:02:00 UTC

*giggles* That is adorable. And hilarious.

altitudeandwine October 15 2005, 23:51:20 UTC

And hilarious.
Nice to hear that :)

dragonstarlin October 15 2005, 20:33:08 UTC

Rocking! So cute! "I'll help you search" You better...and besides Bill, if she never puts it back on, when do you get to take it back off her again?

altitudeandwine October 15 2005, 23:03:17 UTC

when do you get to take it back off her again
*giggle*
Glad you liked it.