ok heres the deal...

Mar 21, 2006 19:33


well ive been writing poetry like a bitch lately.idk why...i just have soo many things to say...and instead of punching the concrete ground.i decided to express myself through writing..i hoep you all enjoy...critique if oyu must....

"Mind Tricks"

Love isn't real
It's all just a gag
It is the world's cruelness
Of showing us something we can't have

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phi_thinker02 March 22 2006, 15:56:06 UTC
USE A FRIGGIN LJ-CUT MAN!

As for the poems, I have one thing to say about love. You wrote it isn't real, but maybe you say that because you thought you loved but you never really had it. It's tricky because even when you think it's there, it's not.

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