We were here

[alucardx]

Here were godly mountains
raised, scratched, and formed by wind's hands
Now rubble
feeble and tenuous
with foundation gasping in whispers beneath
waiting for rain
as Adam's children lean stupefied
minds eradicated by mutual bludgeoning
Specters of hope diminishing
as another pebble aimlessly gambols down

Comments

[deep_water_eyes]

Tell me you wrote this one!

[alucardx]

I did, but I don't like the 3 lines after "waiting for rain." I think there's a more eloquent way of getting the message across that man was responsible for scouring nature.