I'm not sure how Anna turned Joshua or why he didn't confess more to her (like Erica's involvement in the Fifth Column), but I think that's your intention. Keep the readers guessing! ;)
Poor Lisa this chapter, too. I liked the realisation that her mother would allow her to die if there was a benefit from it.
I'd say it's less me trying to keep you guessing and more of the fact that this fic is written in limited third person from Lisa's point of view...and she was more than a little out of it at the time.
Never fear, you should be getting some answers to the second question (regarding what exactly Joshua did or didn't tell Anna and why Erica doesn't have a slew of V's coming after her) in Part III. As for how Anna turned Joshua...you might have to wait a bit longer for that one. :D
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Poor Lisa. I want to hug her, but it won't do a thing when it's from me, I just know it. :(
Happy Almost New Year sweetie!
To more awesome incredible chapters of this story in the new year (and lots more V stories in general of course!)
*HUGS*
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It seems that despite being such a tough FBI agent, Erica gives some of the best hugs.
Happy New Year,
A
PS. I LOVE your icon; Laura looks so cute!
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Awesome job.
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-A
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Poor Lisa this chapter, too. I liked the realisation that her mother would allow her to die if there was a benefit from it.
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I'd say it's less me trying to keep you guessing and more of the fact that this fic is written in limited third person from Lisa's point of view...and she was more than a little out of it at the time.
Never fear, you should be getting some answers to the second question (regarding what exactly Joshua did or didn't tell Anna and why Erica doesn't have a slew of V's coming after her) in Part III. As for how Anna turned Joshua...you might have to wait a bit longer for that one. :D
-A
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And poor Lisa! :(
I can't wait for the next update!! :)
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The next update is coming soon. :D
-A
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