fic: a different kind of tough

Nov 15, 2011 13:37

title: a different kind of tough
pairing: Dean/Sam
rating: NC-17
warnings/enticements: femmeslash, always-a-girl!chesters, second person pov, angst, mentions of dean’s drinking and sam’s tendency to use pain as a coping mechanism .
notes: 3300 words. Set sometime between 7.03 and 7.06 but without the messiness of Dean killing Amy. The mist they ( Read more... )

fanfic, tv: supernatural, it was you and me against the world, i made this!

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painted_pain November 16 2011, 17:49:02 UTC
I really enjoyed the second-person narrative; you employed it with great skill. I loved the repetition of 'you drive, and you drive, and you drive' with 'you wait, and you wait, and you wait'. It felt very fundamental the the winchester way of life.

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alwaysenduphere November 16 2011, 19:24:36 UTC
Thank you! I really enjoy writing second-person so it's always nice to hear when it works out well, hee.
fundamental the the winchester way of life YES ohhh so much, and especially at this particular point in their lives. I wanted to add one more repetition like those, honestly, but there was no place for it. I'm glad you loved those though. <3

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