Alive: Chapter 2

[alxnhnt22]

 

Comments

[gen717]

Awww, you're very welcome! (I just saw a couple of editing things I missed, darnit, but, they're minor). I'm happy to help out. Keep writing, BB, you're doing great!

[alxnhnt22]

don't be too hard on yourself, you did a great job. Thank you for the encouragement! Chapter 3 coming soon :)

[lilacs_roses]

I actually *hadn't* planned on reading this, but I wanted to see if I was right about Chloe's secret. But you haven't gotten to that point yet... at least, you haven't spelled it out /laugh.

That said, however, this was great and I'm looking forward to more :) /laugh

[alxnhnt22]

haha you won't have to wait too much longer for her secret to be mentioned... :) I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[kassie46]

I love how Oliver gets jealous. I think its funny. Great job with this chapter. I can't wait till Oliver finds out Bruce is Batman. And i really wished Tess wouldn't have died i actually started liking her. Anyways great chapter!!!!

[alxnhnt22]

I know, jealous Ollie is just so adorable :) And I totally agree with the Tess, I always liked her though, even as a villain and I'm sad that she died :( stupid Lex lol But anyways, thank you for commenting! I'm glad you liked it!

[madlenita]

So Chloe knows that Bruce=Batman, Oliver don't and Bruce don't know that Chloe know... It will be so fun, when tey foun out about that...

[alxnhnt22]

lol I'm sure it will be quite interesting when they figure it all out. thank you for the comment! I'm glad your liking it :)

[abarbiestory]

oh man crazy chapter i'll have to catch up later with the rest! great job bb

[alxnhnt22]

Thank you for commenting, I'm glad you like it! Lucky you, you wont have to put up with me procrastinating and taking forever to update :) Keep reading!