Fic: Distractions (Fleur, Ron/Hermione)

Jul 22, 2007 23:29

Title: Distractions
Character: Fleur, Ron/Hermione
Word Count: 1016
Rating: PG, I guess.
Note: This contains spoilers for Deathly Hallows. The summary is beneath the cut.

Summary: Hermione needs a distraction.

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"How’s Hermione?”
“Better,” said Ron.  “Fleur’s looking after her.”

- Harry Potter and the Deathly Hollows, page ( Read more... )

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inell July 23 2007, 03:40:23 UTC
It was nice seeing this event from Fleur's POV. A lovely moment from canon, even if it was such a dreadful event. I also liked the scarring, as I, too, thought there very well must be some after the breaking glass and such.

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alyra_77 July 23 2007, 03:45:31 UTC
Thanks! Of course, I'm working on posting and noticed a couple of errors. Think I've caught them. Well, enough for tonight. Bedtime, where I'll likely dream about some plot bunnies...

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heather July 23 2007, 03:44:52 UTC
Oh, this was lovely and sad. I cried for Hermione so much in that entire sequence, and Ron broke my heart when he was screaming for her. This is a nice 'missing moment' from afterward.

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em220 July 24 2007, 02:48:28 UTC
Thank you! This was exactly a missing moment I wanted to see, and you did it beautifully. You made my evening.

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alyra_77 July 24 2007, 02:53:31 UTC
Yay! It seemed one that could be overlooked in favor of some of the others (Fred's funeral, R/Hr in the Chamber of Secrets, etc.)... but it was just so odd to me that it was Fleur taking care of Hermione, and how that would play out. Maybe I'll spin it around and write it from Ron's perspective, but there ae so many folks who do his voice so well, I don't know if I could compete! :)

Thanks for reading this... stop by again soon for more! :)

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Hi jamsel July 25 2007, 21:52:22 UTC
Hi!

Sorry to be random, but I friended you because I really like your fic! I hope that's okay.

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Re: Hi alyra_77 July 26 2007, 02:16:16 UTC
No problem! I'll friend you back! This has been the week from hell at work, but I have all sorts of ideas for new little fics... so I'm glad you friended me!

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