Drabble 01 - Fic: Goodbye

[amatsubu]

Title: Goodbye
Rating: General Audience
Summary: Ian says goodbye to the only man he will ever love
Word Count: 212

Ian wanted to tell Harley how much he loved him but the words simply would not come out. Laying there watching him sleep, Ian knew he would have to leave him soon. Harley deserved so much more and Ian knew if he stayed much longer that

Comments

[marasmine]

Hi! Tygati pointed me in this direction. I'm glad she did.

This drabble leaves so many things unanswered, but gets the emotional point across powerfully. If I didn't already know that there was another morsel to read then I'd be pouting and whining for more (not a pretty sight, I can tell you).

I read an author's journal the other day and she said that she writes her short stories in 100 word segments. I hope you can keep going with your segments.

[amatsubu]

Thanks for the comment! I'm actually coming out of a really LONG writer's block and thought that these drabbles would be a way of helping things along. tygati actually challenged me to only do 100 words a day and thankfully I have been able to exceed that challenge everyday. =P

I greatly appreciate your words of encouragement!!!!