Chapter Fifteen!

[amaya_natsuya]

Yay!  Chapter fifteen, finally.  I've had writer's block from hell, seriously, but it's good now.  Hopefully I'll be able to get chapters done faster now.  No guarantees, but hopefully.

The first nine chapters have also been beta'd by a wonderful person named Tempest Rose.  Thank you so much!  Between Jess, Dentelle, and Tempest, this story is

Comments

[yanagi_wa]

I'm so glad to see another chapter of this story. I really like it.

I'm not good at specific concrit so I'll just say that you need a little more attention to spelling and there's a small problem with properly spelled words but they're in the wrong context. Other than that, it's a wonderful story. More soon please.

[mcartel]

Yay~! An update. I've been following your fics and I really, really like them especially the Lugovalos series as I call them. ^_^ I hope you won't mind me friending you here so I can stalk-...I mean follow *coughs*...*winks* your fics more. I'm also from FF.net, btw. Thanks for sharing such wonderful stories. >(^.^)

[white_panda_san]

I really love this stroy, and am so happy that you updated!

I can't wait for the next instalment

[anonymous]

YAY! You updated!!!

The only thing that I really have to comment on is that Ali's dad has to be there to check him out of the hospital. I don't think that the hospital staff would allow Ali to go with just anyone.

Great Job!

[heeroduoyaoi]

Hey, it's Savannah, from ff.net. I really enjoyed this chapter and Megan did, too. I like the little twists with Voldemort and 'Hugo', as well. They were rather unexpected. I can't wait for the next chapter! You have mastered suspense. Don't keep us hanging for too long!!
Luvs, Savannah