there are lots of typos I notice on second reading, but I threw it together quickly. I like it but it needs editing.
Glad you enjoy. When I read your suggestions, I just thought "what would Jayne do if he saw a bruise on Kaylee" and he started cussing in my brain. So .. there. YAY fic.
I greatly enjoyed it. I can't wait to see what you write from my prompts.
I am not very familiar with the characters because I haven't seen most of the episodes since they originally aired on Fox, but the story and set up was very well done.
I do wish that there was either less Chinese or a glossary at the end that translates what they say.
glossary added. I wrote it originally with real cuss words, but it just sounded wrong because I realized he never uses those words, he uses the chinese.
Glad you like it. If you want sometime, I can loan you my firefly DVD set so you can catch up. The whole season is amazingly good.
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Yay! Thank you! [pets protective!Jayne]
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Glad you enjoy. When I read your suggestions, I just thought "what would Jayne do if he saw a bruise on Kaylee" and he started cussing in my brain. So .. there. YAY fic.
*goes off to fix a few typos in it*
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I greatly enjoyed it. I can't wait to see what you write from my prompts.
I am not very familiar with the characters because I haven't seen most of the episodes since they originally aired on Fox, but the story and set up was very well done.
I do wish that there was either less Chinese or a glossary at the end that translates what they say.
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Glad you like it. If you want sometime, I can loan you my firefly DVD set so you can catch up. The whole season is amazingly good.
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I know that the series is great, it's just been so long and I never did get to see the episodes that they didn' air on Fox so that will be good.
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