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Bounce -- Chapter One

Jul 03, 2011 16:06

I think I'll keep the project on tumblr, but will link all the updates here. Anyway, it's updated! :D Yay for long, long painful delays of writing down Chapter One!

Excerpt:
"Two things registered in my head at that moment: one, that I had landed, somehow, in the very same world I landed a few days ago, in the very same spot (or within an error ( Read more... )

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Comments 2

eorius July 3 2011, 10:11:57 UTC

Pffffft as if I can give critics on your writting. Erm, more drama in the apocalypse prologue? -scratches head-
You evil. Give away the end of the world and leave it hanging in suspense as readers wait for it to approach.
I like this new chapter (≧ロ≦).

amber_intricacy July 3 2011, 10:15:48 UTC

WHAT NO CRITICS? D8 Friendship: -100
jkjk, I'm glad you like it.
"You evil. Give away the end of the world and leave it hanging in suspense as readers wait for it to approach."
That's what I felt when I read Dreamless (dreamless.keenspot.com), which might half-inspired me to do this. Or not. Iunno, I just like the idea of things happening when people sleep. ._.