Comments | amber_serkly: Wine of Ages (Part VI)

amber_serkly

Wine of Ages (Part VI)

Feb 14, 2012 14:36

Title: Wine of Ages (Part VI)
Pairing: Onew/Key, Onew/Taemin
Genre: Romance, Angst, Supernatural, Horror(ish)
Rating: PG-13
Summary: A young innocent boy with rosy cheeks and a beating heart, or a walking corpse with pale -almost ghostly blue, unpulsing flesh? It's up for him to choose.
Prologue | Part I | II | III | IV | V

( “The decision was in your hand, to stay or to leave, as clear as that. You had the control in this yet you chose to leave him hoping for nothing.” )

pairing: onew/taemin, pairing: onew/key, rating: pg-13

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♥ amber_serkly February 14 2012, 10:44:50 UTC

oh thank you, you're the ever so sweet reader <333 :)
lol I dunno how it feels to be pregnant either, but I guess it means I kinda nailed it with this chapter XD
there's so many things I had to do for three months onward, so I hope I'll get some free time to write another chapter again after this ^^;;
well you'll know the ending after you watch the movie! :D but I hope you won't do that bwahaha
umm can't really comment about your assumptions, but like I said, you'll know everything from the movie :D but pls don't watch lol
though there are so many scenes that are totally different from the original ^^ some are not even in the real scenario XD
thanks a bunch for reading and commenting, dear <3 :) I truly appreciate it :D

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amber_serkly February 16 2012, 08:55:34 UTC

MY BROTHER SAID I WAS LAME FOR CRYING OVER THAT MOVIE >:(
ajkalhsl so you've found out what i'm gonna do with them then x)
aw I hope so, thank you gurl, and you really should stop flattering me <3 =w=

raelee92 February 14 2012, 12:14:53 UTC

OH I'M CRYING SO BAD NOW T.T It's a good thing my parents have decided to abandon me at home while they went out for their valentine's day dinner, because i really ended up crying alone at home during valentine's day! (except that the trigger was your amazing fic, lol) But i only wish to be alone now because i can TOTALLY feel kibum's pain. Poor kibum.

"He got up from bed and pulled his arm from Kibum’s grip, ignoring the fact that the other had tightened his hold as he realized that Jinki was going to leave his side. "
ARGHSGDJKT. This broke my heart. I've always had a soft spot for vulnerable!kibum although my bias is onew >,"Maybe if his family didn’t want him back after that, he could stay with Kibum instead ( ... )

amber_serkly February 16 2012, 08:28:18 UTC

lolomg so they left you alone at home huh 8D *okay here's a tissue*

ME TOO AJKASL I FRIGGIN LOVE VULNERABLE!KIBUM OMG HE'S SO PRECIOUS :'DDD

those quotes make me incredibly happy :') but kinda wondering at the same time XD
uhh I think I'm sort of failing this fic by making you guys in lj and aff choose Kibum's side most of the time and I've made you all somewhat ignore Taemin and his misery? :/ (or is it just because my readers are all OnKey ninjas? =.=)
lol ok nvm that, must try harder for the next chapter XDD
bwhaha i love you too<3

raelee92 February 16 2012, 14:33:23 UTC

*takes your tissue and blows nose*

I KNOW I KNOW! don't you just want to hug him and squish him!!!!!! Heh even if you paint taemin to be extremely pitiful i would still choose kibum's side, duh. I never ship any other pairings except for onkey. I'm just stubborn i guess, heh. i'm like that with regard to everything else in my life.

Don't worry, you never fail in your fics, it's just that readers like me are stubborn old mules lol. Keep writing my dear! And GOOD LUCK with schoolwork! I know that's always a big pain in the butt ):

emptycavern February 14 2012, 14:08:52 UTC

Whoo finally you updated! And on Valentine's day!
Man this is getting good. I am dying to know what Jinki does then, but of course I don't want him to leave Kibum, especially when the dead boy is already growing somewhat reliant on him.

Sorry Taemin, you're still young, you can find another love. HAHA.
Oh and you know, don't worry about the details because I feel that it's good, it gives me a lot of imageries as I read the story and that helps a lot to let your readers feel what your characters are feeling as well.

You did a great job bb! I hope every else has been going well for you <3

amber_serkly February 16 2012, 08:51:37 UTC

yeah i just realized that when raelee mentioned about valentine's day XDD
lol you guys treasure Kibum so much that it makes me sad for our taeminnie :')
am i the only one who cares about him? TTvTT
another love like who? Jjong? :D
and about the details, thank you for your input, i'm gonna keep it going :3
thanks a bunch for reading and commenting dear, i friggin love ya :3

emptycavern February 16 2012, 12:47:05 UTC

HAHA YES it is because we are Onkey stans! (I am not much for Ontae too oops..) BUT Jjong sounds like a pedo uncle hahaha terrorising Taemin like that. I hope things get sotrted out somehow!
Love you right back! <3

tokki24 February 15 2012, 05:06:28 UTC

So, actually Jinki wants to leave the place but he still can't leave Kibum?
Ohohohoooo.. No one can resist Kibum's pleading gaze.. And it makes me curious with what Jinki'll do.. Щ(ºДºщ)
And then, they kiss!! Is Jinki's heart start to move?? And Jjong, eeeewwww I don't like his teasing to Taem like that.. (but I still love you Jjong, ㅋㅋ)
Update soon puhleeeaaassseee.. XD

amber_serkly February 16 2012, 08:36:55 UTC

uh huh Jinki is totally confused with his own feelings ^^;; but there's Amber! :D she'd help him to make up his mind~ :3
oh yeah Kibum's pleading gaze =w= it'd weaken my everyone's knees♥ TTvTT
if you're that curious, you can go rent the movie, dear! 8D no please please don't do that
lol did Jjong disgust you that much? you have to bear it for a while then :))
thank you for reading and commenting <3 :)