Deeper

Oct 07, 2010 21:30

Title: Deeper
Author: Amber
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Fernando Torres/Sergio Ramos, Iker Casillas, Cesc Fabregas
Disclaimer: Not mine at all. I just borrow and play.
A/N: Comes after Maybe I do Care It's kind of a bit more into Fernando's brain. ALSO HUGE THANK YOU To liroa15  I'm very grateful to have her around.
Warning: It is a BDSM fic. Also the kind of ( Read more... )

secret life - football, player: fernando torres, pairing: torres/ramos, player: sergio ramos

Leave a comment

Comments 45

inesdelsol October 8 2010, 11:27:13 UTC
Interesting. I'm not into BDSM, it hurts too much and I don't mean the physical pain, but this story is really good. Thank you for sharing :)

Reply

flvy October 8 2010, 23:22:34 UTC
I think a lot of BDSM fic is boarder line rape and abuse. If it's within a safe and sane relationship you have the after care and the moments before. I think if I just posted the sex that it would look like that.

Reply


karneol_vision October 8 2010, 12:05:24 UTC
How wild... I think I adore this!

And I usually never adore anything without my love in it, as a rule.

Your writing is amazing!

Reply

flvy October 8 2010, 23:26:06 UTC
Hahaha well thank you :D Maybe I'll get your bb a little cameo. Sergio has to go back to Real sometime lol

Reply

karneol_vision October 14 2010, 19:08:48 UTC
*headdesk* I deeply apologize for the late reply, but Yay! that'd be... I don't even know what... &hearts

(As long as he's not Kaka-obssessed, that is, but Yay!)

Reply

karneol_vision October 14 2010, 19:11:01 UTC
(Ah, whatever, I suppose I'd even take him Kaka-obssessed if I had to, lol >__<)

Reply


theosakansun October 8 2010, 16:14:58 UTC
Oh my god this fic :D I remember when I read the first part of this and was like BDSM O.O this will harm me for life :P But after reading that, I've actually gotten into this kind of fics and I've read plenty of them. Non written with this pairing though. This is pretty soft-core compared to some of the things I've read, but I actually prefer this to the rougher fics, because I'm a sucker for cute relationships. :)

I love the friendly banter between Iker and Fernando, but also between Sergio and Fernando when they were looking for sextoys online.

I love how eager Sergio is, how he really wants Fernando to use him. And I love how Fernando really cannot let go and therefore still is very nice and caring and lovely and somewhat afraid of hurting Sergio :)

Reply

flvy October 8 2010, 23:28:55 UTC
They're cute and they're kinky. I mean it's the building blocks here so they are going to start with bondage and getting beaten, but it's still going to have love and fluff on either side. Like you said Fernando is still holding back a bit.

They'll always be adorable even if Sergio can't walk correctly the next day.

Reply


clemmajane October 8 2010, 17:49:40 UTC
The shopping spree....OMG. This was amazing

Reply

flvy October 8 2010, 23:29:08 UTC
:D Thank you.

Reply


bentlerkay October 8 2010, 23:52:04 UTC
I might need a cock ring soon if I continue to read these.

Reply

flvy October 8 2010, 23:54:16 UTC
I think that this is my favorite comment of all time.

Reply


Leave a comment

Up