Judgment Comes

Nov 16, 2009 21:09

“Let go of me!” The woman cried as she was pinned against the wall, “HELL-hum” her scream was cut off by the man’s lips pressing hard against hers. Just as the woman was about to give up her façade, there was a gust of wind and the man pressing against her was thrown across the alleyway and into brink wall. She looked around and falling on the ( Read more... )

fanfic, season 9, judgment comes, chlark, lois, clark, oliver, smallville, chloe

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wwg23 November 17 2009, 04:35:55 UTC
Choronzon watched as Lois joined the group and his interest in the conversation began to fade. “You know, I wonder if anyone really knew the story on how she got her job.” He heard Ursula state.

“I doubt it, it’s all about ICONIC MYTHOS in this Universe.” He replied gruffly turning to finish off his drink.

It seems they didn’t get the job though,” Zaden chuckled, “isn’t he supposed to be hiding his face? I mean where his glasses?” he added asking Choronzon.

Who simply shrugged, “How the hell am I supposed to know? You’d think you know and understand one thing and then you get some sort of retcon.”

Ursula blinked, “Retcon, what the hell are you talking about?”

Rolling his eyes, “It’s a term I got very used to when dealing with the PSW universe.”

Hee. I love the meta in your story. I'm looking forward to the next part. :)

Q: Is there a PS and a PSW universe or is it a typo?

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ambergalaxy November 17 2009, 04:52:33 UTC
Sorry, I thought I'd be funny and retcon the name of the universe after mentioning the word, LOL. Sorry I guess the joke seemed more funny when I wrote it.

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wwg23 November 17 2009, 09:38:00 UTC
Hee! The joke went over my head. :)

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babydee1 November 17 2009, 09:26:06 UTC
Once again, fanfic proves more entertaining than the actual show!

Excellent start, Amber. I so love the reference to the Moronic Duo!

"Ursula looked at him, “Wow that was evolved.”

“Hey, I’m not the one who slept with a Kryptonain.” He retorted getting up off the barstool.

She turned to face him, “That was a different universe, and don’t get me started, you slept with that human.” She pointed to Chloe.

He sighed, “That was a different time…” he said softly taking a quick look at Chloe before heading to the restroom."

Now you got me all curious! What's all that about?

Please post more soon! :-P

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eternal_moonie November 17 2009, 11:07:46 UTC
WOOHOO!!!!

My honey has started a new fanfic! Funny that you didn't tell me about it sooner! Totally Explosive AWESOME start honey!

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khylaa November 18 2009, 05:42:54 UTC
Great start! Very entertaining!
Thanks for sharing!

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chloista4ever November 26 2009, 04:14:15 UTC
Hey doll, just reading this and asking you desperately to continue because this just rocks! very very intriguing fic

ppms!

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