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amberwinters

Fic:The Servant (8/?)

Apr 17, 2011 08:39

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prohibiton_sign April 17 2011, 10:05:41 UTC

I'm loving this environment and your sense of detail! Alli certainly has some convincing to do, her Prince isn't really interested in women and I'd think even less after her womanly shapes have started to show :)

silva_ted8 April 17 2011, 10:37:09 UTC

Happy for update. Hope Allison doesn't turn against Kris because of her jealousy. The Kradam attraction is mutual and Kris is under the demon spell. Prince Madu must be Adam's rival for the throne. I have the image of Madu as a Gokey clone! Fun story. Await divine #9! :)

nzfan April 17 2011, 10:49:05 UTC

Absolutely brilliant chapter! Poor Allison - no amount of curves or breasts are going to entice Adam!

malady91 April 17 2011, 11:12:10 UTC

yeah for the update...i feel bad for allison but adam has eyes for kris only i guess...but the part where they said their i love yous and kris being heartbroken, was devastating. poor kris...

revontulet_iam April 17 2011, 12:11:05 UTC

Aww this was my favorite chapter. I love Allison. She seems like a really cool and sweet kid but I have a feeling she might have something against Kris lusting over her husband.