Fic: The Servant (9/?)

[amberwinters]

Comments

[crybaby4u]

Allison's servant gave some interesting information. Helps to see how things are done and how other people perceive the Prince's affection for Men. It is not as widely accepted as he would have it appear.

Kris is starting to see a different point a view regarding what is a sin and that is good.

[amberwinters]

I am trying to build the world and put the characters in context. The Agbekians are definitely not homophobic and think men can have sex. However, men are supposed to like women too and procreate. So, although homosexuality is acceptable there is a narrow deifnition which means Adam is not as free as he would like or acts. As a side note, some cultures overlook homosexuality in the context of it being done when women are unavailable or if it is before marriage.

[prohibiton_sign]

Reading this was the best part of my day! Thank you!

[amberwinters]

Aww, thanks,bb. I feel like folgers, lol.

[silva_ted8]

Every story needs a villain and Madu fits the bill. The chances are on a Madu and Adam meeting and the same for Brad and Kris. Clash of the titans and their underlings. The makings of a soap fest with swords and claws. Poor Allison in a passionless marriage. Adam prefers his boy toys like Kris. Will perfect #10 give us Kradam in love? Can't wait! :)

[amberwinters]

Madu really will fit the bill. Yes, you know me and my soapy drama, haha. I am trying to get better at pacing the twists and turns so it isn't too "days of our lives". I may not suceed.

[untamedfilly]

I guess we'll get the full Brad background when Madu gets there. I'm wondering if Adam will put up a bigger fight for Kris. It seems that Adam is a little more taken with Kris and Madu may sense that, but I guess we'll see.

I love that Adam was ---->here
and Kris was ---->there
but slowly they are slowly moving toward somewhere in the middle.

Can't wait until the next update bb! <333

[amberwinters]

I haven't written the chapter yet but I am hoping to play out what is in my head which if I suceed will be really good. However, I don't always write what I imagine. Somehow, it morphs when I put it in words. Maybe that is what happens to all writers but I hope eventually I can capture exactly what I am thinking.

[untamedfilly]

You never let us down, so just keep doing what you're doing! Can't wait to see how it turns out!

[revontulet_iam]

I'm absolutely in love with you. This is getting more and more interesting.For some reason I think there's going to be trouble for both Adam and Kris. Prince Madu seems like a really proud and evil person and if he took Brad then he might want to take Kris as well just to anger Adam. Looking forward to reading the next part :D

[amberwinters]

Thanks, bb. I am really looking forward to writing the next few chapters. This story is alot of fun.