Fic: The Servant (12/?)

[amberwinters]

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[pinkeurogirl]

Poor kris admittIng his love then being rejected. Way to go Adam! Stupid boy. Bad times ahead :-(

[amberwinters]

There is abit of a rocky road but when are my stories ever angst free, lol.

[mdzw]

Poor Kris!

[amberwinters]

There is a light somewhere.

[revontulet_iam]

Poor Kris, but I sort of understand Adam's behavior. I think it's hard for him to trust someone after what happened with Brad. However, I think he genuinely cares for Kris. He didn't force him and he was really patient and caring.
And there's a line that I particularly loved: “I want to come in you while we are making love.” He used make love not sex hasn't he? It could be nothing but I'm a sucker for this kind of things.
I'm really looking forward for the next chapter.

[amberwinters]

Although they have been forming a bond, they were not at the point of full trust. Warrior Princes don't trust easily.

[noor_bill83]

As hard as it can be for Adam to trust another person, he didn't need to be a monster, cause he acted like one.
Finally Kris opened up his heart, and what he did? He acst like an insensitive bastard. You can reject a person and be gentle anyway.

[amberwinters]

Mature,tactful approaches are not Prince Adam's specialty.

[silva_ted8]

Yay for update and the Kradam union but Adam ruined the post coital bliss! Adam's brusque reaction was likely due to his bad experiences with Brad. The latter probably manipulated Adam with false declarations of love. Adam has complained several times about spoiled conniving servants taking advantage of him. Poor Kris though, treated like a used dish rag after losing his virginity. Adam should realise that Kris is a million times better than Brad! Like to see Adam appreciate Kris more in Lucky #13.

[amberwinters]

As usual your summation of the situation is spot on. Adam has quite a bit of baggage that affects his and Kris' relationship.