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amberwinters

Fic: The Servant (13/?)

May 15, 2011 13:06

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susysunflower May 15 2011, 13:05:57 UTC

This story is like some elaborate chess game with Kris as a pawn. Don't trust Madu. Nope, not at all.

amberwinters May 16 2011, 04:52:00 UTC

I am trying to write an interesting fic, lol. We'll see if I can pull off the elaborate plot without getting to like a soap drama.

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amberwinters May 16 2011, 04:53:11 UTC

Me neither. I drove through it but I don't remember stopping long. Actually, I amnot even sure if I drove through Dallas or Houston. haha.

pinkeurogirl May 15 2011, 13:53:34 UTC

I fear for kris. Do not think madu can be trusted

amberwinters May 16 2011, 04:53:47 UTC

Kris is naive and far too trusting.

crybaby4u May 15 2011, 14:21:36 UTC

I wouldn't trust Madu but I do understand Kris' dilemma. He has no real option here. I really wonder went down between Madu and Adam so long ago. It is all so complicated. I feel for them both right now. I hope Adam doesn't hold Kris' actions against him.

amberwinters May 16 2011, 04:55:48 UTC

Kris has no real experience todeal with intrigue. Growing up in a religious small farming village didn't prepare him too well.

mhobbs0430 May 15 2011, 14:35:30 UTC

I really hope that Adam understands and takes him back. Poor Kris and Adam.

amberwinters May 16 2011, 04:56:38 UTC

Might be too close to his last expereince with a servant for him to think straight.