Fic: The Servant (14/?)

[amberwinters]

Comments

[pinkeurogirl]

interesting developments with the madu and adam history. i think adam really does care for kris. looking forward to more.

[amberwinters]

Thanks I hope it doesn't take me as long to do the next chapter.

[malady91]

yeah update! i've been waitin for your updates! thank you! interesting plot twist...i wonder whats gonna happpen to neyou? and what are the fates of kris, adam and madu?? teehee...

[amberwinters]

Me too. I can't wait to see where the story goes. The plot in my head doesn't always make it to the paper, lol.

[revontulet_iam]

You updated! I've constantly checking your profile to see whether you've updated.
I'm really surprised about the twist. I never really expected things to turn this way but you managed to surprise me once again. I think I'm starting to like Madu a bit more now that I know where this animosity towards Adam comes from and I kind of understand him. And the fact that he had been true to his word and didn't rape Kris really makes me think that he might not be the person we thought he was.
I love the fact that Adam wanted to take Kris away from Madu. I do think he cares for Kris, but for some reason I think he did it because he was drunk or because he was humiliated.
Can't wait for the next bit. I really hope Adam will understand why Kris acted the way he did.

[amberwinters]

I can't believe I took two weeks! That is my longest gap ever. Anyway, I am glad I surprised you and it didn't come off predictable. Working out the details of the next chapter but I hope to post before I travel again.

[amberwinters]

I am happy it makes sense. I still have to flesh out more details.

[caroline_cuna]

Yey, an update! I like how your story is evolving at a fast pace without sacrificing the suspense and the build up of the plot. Fantastic!

[amberwinters]

Thanks, bb. I am trying not to drag this out to much :)