Fic: The Servant (14/?)

May 29, 2011 12:14



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astiga0802 May 29 2011, 22:45:57 UTC
I did not expect that at all, and I really think adam is falling for kris!

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amberwinters June 1 2011, 01:08:29 UTC
Gotta keep you all on your toes :)

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ga_ala_girl May 30 2011, 01:26:28 UTC
Thank you so much for this update. You really gave us interesting background info on Adam and Madu pasts. Maybe they can somehow get past their mistrust of each other and have more peaceful future. Thanks too for keeping Kris from being raped. Because of the Prince/servant relationship and the way servants are perceived by their society, it seems it will be difficult for Adam to admit his feelings for Kris even though it is obvious to everyone he has them. thanks for your time spent on this story.

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amberwinters June 1 2011, 01:09:57 UTC
Adam is probably not good at admiting his feelings to a servant plus he got burned by his previous servant. So Kris went into the situation with strikes against him.

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silva_ted8 May 30 2011, 02:25:42 UTC
Happy with your update! Your story is addictive and I've been checking for it every day. The Servant is like a guilty pleasure and my secret crack! I like that you have given Madu a heart. An aggrieved ex lover lashing out rather than an innately nasty villain. Next comes an Adam Madu reconciliation and their pairing with their respective servants? Knowing you, there will be some angst yet. Maybe Madu gets jealous when he sees Adam has fallen for Kris and he tries to sabotage their relationship? Can't wait for #15. Thanks for investing time and effort into writing and sharing :)

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amberwinters June 1 2011, 01:13:24 UTC
Well, I missed you all commenting too. I wanted to make the Adam/Madu relationship complex. I wasn't sure when to reveal the nature of it but then I realized I didn't want a 50 chapter fic, lol. Thanks for always leaving encouraging comments :)

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amberwinters June 1 2011, 01:14:05 UTC
Thank you so much, bb. After I respond to you all I am going to work on the next chapter.

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untamedfilly May 30 2011, 03:07:10 UTC
Oooooh, the plot thickens...

Miss you! <3

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amberwinters June 1 2011, 01:21:16 UTC
It sure does...I am totally enjoying this NY weather. Ilove summers here. Ironically I am spending the rest of the summer in the other hemisphere so I get to have winter again :)

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