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amberwinters

Fic: The Servant (15/?)

Jun 14, 2011 17:57

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fanfic11 June 14 2011, 21:29:18 UTC

Keep on standing up for yourself Kris.
I was so happy when I saw the new update. I really love this story <3

We get to read about Kris` thoughts which is good, but I really wanna know a little bit of Adams thoughts, like Adams POV in some chapters, it would be nice to know what he thinks.

I`m gonna go on vacation next week so I`m sad I won`t see the next chapter before that*pouts*.

amberwinters June 15 2011, 18:18:02 UTC

I have not mastered the POV thing so I keep it simple. I either do both in a chapter or stick to one person. I am hoping to take a writing class someday and learn more tricks of the trade :)

fanfic11 June 15 2011, 19:44:31 UTC

I think your writing is great bb :)
You`re really talented.

Can`t wait for the next update! :D

fran2011 June 14 2011, 21:50:30 UTC

Excellent chapter!!! IM also glad that Kris stood up for himself.

amberwinters June 15 2011, 18:18:27 UTC

Thanks, bb!

mhobbs0430 June 14 2011, 22:52:13 UTC

I guess I'm glad that Kris stood up for himself too, but he missed out on what probably would have been an amazing blowjob if he had just kept his mouth shut. lol not really. I just really want Adam to realize that he loves Kris too so we can have some incredible smex and a happy Kradam ending. Well not ending, cause I want this to go on forever.

Update soon, muah!

amberwinters June 15 2011, 18:19:44 UTC

He is his own cockblocker, lol. I will try and post sooner than the last few chapters. Thanks for always commenting.

crybaby4u June 14 2011, 23:20:27 UTC

I've missed this story. Hopeful that the Prince will start to see Kris as more than just a servant. He does appear to have feelings for him but it seems the 'rules' of society are still a huge problem.

amberwinters June 15 2011, 18:21:42 UTC

Me too. I missed posting but am glad I got back to it. The days just seem to fly by lately. I think it is hard to ignore rules when you are the heir to a throne. (Not that I would know, lol)

silva_ted8 June 14 2011, 23:52:47 UTC

Yay for update! I was really missing your story. Adam can be an insensitive jerk. When is he going to exorcise the damaging influence of Brad from his current relationship with Kris? Good on Kris for being assertive and sarcastic. Eagerly await #16. Please make it sooner than later! :)

silva_ted8 June 15 2011, 16:30:36 UTC

Reading your Kris, Adam and Brad made me think of 1001 Nights. Kris is like Scheherazade, a virgin who slowly disarms and wins the heart of the King through wit, charm, talent and loyalty ( ... )

amberwinters June 15 2011, 18:06:35 UTC

Wow. I never read 1001 nights but I liked that snippet. What can I say it is a tale as old as time...hahah. You know I love your comments because they almost make me think :)