Fic: The Servant (18/?)

[amberwinters]

Comments

[pinkeurogirl]

interesting. kris is lying to everyone now. leila is an evil queen. kris needs to be careful.

[amberwinters]

Yeah he is def not being the exemplerary southern. The Glambert force is too strong, lol.

[astiga0802]

Kris and adam are really having to be sneaky...just hope it does not blow up on them... i want them to truly be together!

[amberwinters]

My characters get busted for sneaky behavior? Never...:)

[stormybear30]

I had such a horrible night at work tonight and this was a pleasant surprise. I'm excited that Adam halfway admitted that he cared for Kris even know we all know that he does. I don't trust Adam's mother at all and have a really bad feelings that bad stuff is about to happen to our two fave characters. Great chapter!!!

[amberwinters]

Sorry you had a bad night at work but I am glad this helped. The Agbekians are more showers than talkers. Luckily Kris does not seem to be all that put off by Adam's inability to express himself.

[amberwinters]

Thanks, bb.

[silva_ted8]

Yay for update! Leila is a shrewd and dangerous woman. She's more manipulative than Adam! She probably wants Kris to encourage Adam to consummate his marriage. Would not be surprised if Kris is discovered breaching Agbekian custom while sharing skins with Adam. Could Raja be Leila's spy? Exploring the dark side of the characters, Agbekian culture and human nature makes for an interesting story. #19 next!:)

[amberwinters]

Leila is just plain mean and his definitely more interested in ruling a country than raising a son. As for Raja...who knows :)