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amberwinters

Fic: The Servant (19/?)

Jul 06, 2011 03:56

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cunningdeb July 6 2011, 03:23:26 UTC

I get more and more enthralled with this story Amber. You are a brilliant writer. I can imagine this as a movie, you're so visual with your words.

Looking forward to so much more

Hugs
Deb <333

amberwinters July 10 2011, 09:53:26 UTC

Thanks so much, Deb. The more I write, the more critical I become of my own writing. Maybe that is a good sign.

mhobbs0430 July 6 2011, 03:44:40 UTC

I am totally sqeeing at this chapter. I know there's angst coming, but I am so happy right now. muah!

amberwinters July 10 2011, 09:53:58 UTC

There is angst coming in but maybe not from wither one of them...

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amberwinters July 10 2011, 09:54:35 UTC

Thanks, bb. I am fine tuning the next chapter as I reply.

mhobbs0430 July 6 2011, 04:37:15 UTC

I just read this again. Please don't ever end this story.

amberwinters July 10 2011, 09:55:16 UTC

I am going to end in about five chapters before I ruin it, lol.

pinkeurogirl July 6 2011, 05:25:24 UTC

i love how close they are now :-)

amberwinters July 10 2011, 09:57:12 UTC

Thanks. I am trying to make it believable. Since Kris is so naive and inexpereinced, I figured people could understand him having sex and falling in love immediately.