Fic: The Servant (21/25)

[amberwinters]

Comments

[purplegirll]

i dont comment all the time but I am really loving this story, the intrigue and double dealing...hard to keep track of, I feel sorry for Kris...will be interesting to see how it all falls into place,

[amberwinters]

Thanks for commenting. Yeah, I hope itdoes all fall into place:)

[cunningdeb]

OMG that's an intriguing ending

more .... more .... more .... puleeeze!!!!!

Huggles
Deb <333

[amberwinters]

Working on it, Deb. I have so many ideas but I really need to end it before I get lost in the twists and turns.

[crybaby4u]

There is a lot of twist and turns of intrigue going on here. You are building quite the complicated story. I have no idea who's going to betray who. Who is the enemy and who's in alliance with who. It's like unraveling layers and layers of of mystery.

I feel Kris should trust no one.

[amberwinters]

Tell me about it. I am going to start tying things together soon after a few more twists.

[krisfannum1]

I haven't been commenting but I definitely have been reading this. Poor Kris is probably so confused I hope he doesn't keep what he saw a secret and confronts Madu but knowing Kris he'd probably keep it to himself/ This story is very compelling and I hope there is more really soon because I need to know what's going on. Thank you so much for this story but I'm sad to see that it is almost finished.

[amberwinters]

Thanks for letting me know you are reading. I will be sad to say goodbye to the characters but it will feel good to reach the end.

[adamgrrrl]

i think i'm gonna have a stroke w all this head-spinning intrigue...
and that last line--- \o~O/

[amberwinters]

:)