Wow! So many twists and turns in this politically driven power hungry story. It seems Kris should keep everything to himself and trust no one. Interesting cliffie, btw.
You are an amazing writer!lovethemboys2July 18 2011, 14:30:10 UTC
OMG, this story is really fantastic & you are truly an amazing writer, I follow what you write & Your plots are usually very smart & you have an incredible talent for story telling! I don't know what you are doing in real life! But if you aren't you should persue writing. Getting this out of my system, I have to tell you that at the begining I was able to read between your lines & figure where you are heading with your charecters & what destiny they might await, until you published this very rich chapter & I am totally lost, I don't know whom to believe & whom not! I most definetly don't want Kris heart to be broken, or Adam not to be safe or the boys not to end together, but I don't know how can You do that with all the lines of the story entangled like that! Nothing is Guaranteed anymore! So all I ask of you, to publish the next chapter very very soon..like today! to let me how your tricky mind will sort this very complicated situation out! Peace!
Re: You are an amazing writer!amberwintersJuly 22 2011, 17:42:16 UTC
Wow, thak you so much for the compliments. I think in the beginning its easy to follow my thinking because I know aht is going to happen. However, usually I only plan the first few parts and then its as much a mysterty to me as it is to you what happens. So, I can't really foreshadow what I don't know :)
I love this story and im sad it will be ending on chp25, but im glad we have long chapters to look forward too.
This chapter was very interesting and excellent! I dont know what to make of the end, maybe Adam and Madu are setting up a secret meetup for Adam and Kris.
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Getting this out of my system, I have to tell you that at the begining I was able to read between your lines & figure where you are heading with your charecters & what destiny they might await, until you published this very rich chapter & I am totally lost, I don't know whom to believe & whom not! I most definetly don't want Kris heart to be broken, or Adam not to be safe or the boys not to end together, but I don't know how can You do that with all the lines of the story entangled like that! Nothing is Guaranteed anymore!
So all I ask of you, to publish the next chapter very very soon..like today! to let me how your tricky mind will sort this very complicated situation out! Peace!
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This chapter was very interesting and excellent! I dont know what to make of the end, maybe Adam and Madu are setting up a secret meetup for Adam and Kris.
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