You have a knack for writing Slut(!)Adam and victim Kris. Pity naive Kris, his innocence corrupted by the wolfish Prince Charming. Madu as the mature one in the story is right about Adam: he doesn't deserve Kris. Hope Adam sees sense in #27 and makes it up to Kris. Enjoyable fantasy soap and drama.
Yes, I can see my readers are rising up against Callous!Adam, lol. I am not sure if this more soap opera than GG but it certainly is much harder to keep track of in my head.
He doesn't deserve him!lovethemboys2August 14 2011, 12:45:28 UTC
My friend, you managed in this chapter to let me reach the unthinkable; something that I never imagined myself saying since there was KRADAM & there were fiction stories that fantasize & build up hopes about their relationship. "Kris should not end up with Adam, he should leave him right now & back home, this is obviously not his environment, (this)Adam is not worthy as a lover nor as a King, he can't distinguish between what's true & what's not, what's good & what's bad & you managed to make us see how distorted his decisions are; he should live to regret losing someone like KRIS, real love is not to be found round the corner
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Re: He doesn't deserve him!amberwintersAugust 14 2011, 16:00:05 UTC
Wow. How do you really feel, lol. I agree an emotional betrayal is much worse than just a physical affair. Kris has every right to feel angry and betrayed. But people have baggage and they are not always ready to move on without a backslide. Sometimes people can't let og of their past until they finally realize what it is costing them in the present.
I feel so bad for Kris in this.... He loves Adam, but Adam doesn't know how to show his love back. There is so much going on, Kris must be confused especially since he is used to living a much simpler life.
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Don't trust anyone Kris - look out for yourself!!
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