Fic: The Deal (12/?)

[amberwinters]

Comments

[crybaby4u]

It is kind of amazing how much of a gullible idiot Kris
comes off as. People in his life manipulate him at will and he falls for the party line way too easily.

Adam deserves a better life. Hope he finds it.

[amberwinters]

Agreed, not really the right kind of person to be engaging in illicit affairs but at least he sort of realizes thinks aren't adding up.

[amberwinters]

Thanks, bb. Your kind comments go along way as incentive to keep writing. Hopefully, I won't take so long next time.

[crisanne07]

Thank you so much for update!! so much worth the wait!!!
Cale and Katy is evil but so glad that Kris know the truth!!!
Looking forward for next chapter!! it's Vegas time bb:)

[amberwinters]

Thanks, bb. Yeah, Cale and Katy are not really doing Kris any favors.

[caroline_cuna]

I will also offer you whatever you like so you won't stop writing:) I had to read the previous chapter again because I had already forgotten what happened last time-- LOL. Thanks for the update, Amber. I hope the next chapter will be up tomorrow. (I am definitely not demanding). Love you, CC.

[amberwinters]

Thanks, BB. If it is any consolation, I had to reread the whole story before I finished this last chapter, lol. So it isn't any easier on me writing after such a delay as it is for you reading. I'll try and do better :)

[pinkeurogirl]

Kris is really being stupid here. Katy and cale lying to him. He needs to fight for Adam if he really wants him

[amberwinters]

Kris has relly been consistently stupid and constantly believing the worst of Adam.