"you deserve better"

[ambiguous]

you deserve better ; pg-13 ; kris/lay ; one-shot.
based on the verbal jint video. au. kris has his worries about lay's relationship.

Comments

[kanji00]

i like how much your writing is abstract and detached, but focused (pinned here on kris' feelings and observations). it's almost like it was originally written in another language, the way it flows, and it's a nice starkness :)

thanks for the good read~ <3

[tyreling]

;A; Awww poor Kris. So after all this time he was just a dog who couldn't do anything. ;A; I like the fact that you kept Kris's identity a secret till the very end. And now everything made sense why Kris was so helpless.

[bicurious_chen]

omg this is so nicely written. I started to cry when I realized kris was only a dog. it all makes sense. I hate the girl even more cuz she kicked and mistreated a dog! u should write a sequel in which kris turns into an actual human. lol my poor shipping heart.
thank you!!!

[xxhna]

The girl kicked a dog?! WHAT COLDHEARTED WITCH.

Poor Lay =/