You write beautifully
anonymous
August 16 2009, 22:41:16 UTC
Dear online friend, I was perusing through your online gurnal, when I came across this beautiful piece of literature. You sir, are a true wordsmith. Kudos on your efforts here and I expect great things from you in future! Great! Your verse: " sleep evades those who study, in the wee hours, their minds go nutty, left and right, caffinated drinks consumed like air to help you think." I feel like you can see right through me. It is so true, we do both consume (or "breathe") air and think. Poignant. Now go study the Bible, because I hear if you fail that one Jesus doesn't love you anymore. Signed, Your greatest admirer
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I was perusing through your online gurnal, when I came across this beautiful piece of literature. You sir, are a true wordsmith. Kudos on your efforts here and I expect great things from you in future! Great!
Your verse:
" sleep evades those who study,
in the wee hours, their minds go nutty,
left and right, caffinated drinks
consumed like air to help you think."
I feel like you can see right through me. It is so true, we do both consume (or "breathe") air and think. Poignant.
Now go study the Bible, because I hear if you fail that one Jesus doesn't love you anymore.
Signed,
Your greatest admirer
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