For upchucked! Interlude (2NE1, Bom/CL, PG)

Jan 09, 2013 22:01

Title: Interlude
Recipient: upchucked
Group(s)/Artist(s): 2NE1
Pairing(s)/Character(s): CL/Bom
Rating: PG
Warning(s):
Summary: Small moments during rehearsal.
Note(s): Hi recipient! I hope you enjoy this, and I’m sorry it’s so short. Also, I loved all of your ideas (especially Hayi and TOP being awkward together)!

'I wasn't trying for cute,' Bom grumbles. )

*2ne1, !fic

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gdgdbaby January 10 2013, 05:22:15 UTC
the details in this were so great, and i love all the little interactions between the girls that you included :3 the second to last paragraph is super lovely ♥

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whetstone January 14 2013, 03:07:48 UTC
thank you for the compliments! also for holding my hand throughout the writing of this ;A; couldn't have done it without you lmao ♥

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whetstone January 14 2013, 03:11:55 UTC
haha, i was honestly a bit afraid that all the details and introducing all four members would clutter up the fic, but i'm happy to hear that it didn't. :D and i'm glad you liked it enough to reread, wow. thank you!

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whetstone January 14 2013, 03:51:07 UTC
AHH DON'T APOLOGIZE! seriously i'm so glad you liked it, i tried 389432 different fics for all the prompts you gave before settling on this, so i was kind of freaking out about it hahaha

yay! when you prompted clbom it made me really sit down and think about them together and i guess kind of bounce how i see their personalities off of each other, and the dichotomy of how different their personalities are is pm exactly how you described it here so i'm excited it worked out okay :DD and YES i get used to thinking of cl as the ~coolheaded leader and then i see her dancing or moving or something and i'm just like but how???

YES i just want all the fic for ygfam and especially tophayi because idek how top would react to her now that they're both in the same company and can't avoid each other lmfao. and i'm just really glad you liked it and the prompts were all really great!! you're welcome! ♥♥

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frailspells January 12 2013, 21:37:37 UTC
this may be short but i don't think that's a point against it at all! it's both concise and precise, and you fit a lot of meaningful details and characterization into a compact space, which is a skill to be envied imo. i really love, especially, the tension in the last few paragraphs, and you build it up so well. (also yes I TOTALLY UNDERSTAND the urge to stare at chaerin. boy do i understand.)

anyway that was all to say that this is fantastic and a pleasure to read!

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whetstone January 14 2013, 04:03:41 UTC
thank you so much! i always feel like i have trouble balancing moving the plot along and adding all the details that i want to, so it's nice to hear that it worked out in this instance. and ikr, i'm forever watching her during 2ne1 perfs, haha. i have to rewatch for the other girls a lot, it's so bad.

thank you again, and i'm glad you enjoyed the read (:

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