Comments | amelia_kay: VM FIC: "It's Like Serendipity Or Something." (Jackie, Veronica)

amelia_kay

VM FIC: "It's Like Serendipity Or Something." (Jackie, Veronica)

Feb 23, 2006 17:24

TITLE: It's Like Serendipity Or Something
AUTHOR: amelia_kay
SERIES: Veronica Mars
CHARACTERS: Jackie, Veronica. Hints of We/V, L/V, J/Wa and a few others.
SUMMARY: Jackie and Veronica have a sleepover. Wacky all-dialogue hijinks ensue.

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veronica mars

Comments 67

marty2103 February 23 2006, 23:09:35 UTC

this was really fun i enjoyed it!!!! Great snark after this i might consider that Veronica and Jackie could be friends!

amelia_kay February 24 2006, 13:22:39 UTC

Hee! I totally think they almost already are. Almost. Glad you enjoyed this. =)

littlenikki0620 February 23 2006, 23:18:31 UTC

This was great. I love seeing Jackie and Veronica together. They could definately become good friends if they tried. Fantastic job!!

amelia_kay February 24 2006, 13:23:02 UTC

Thank you!!!!

buffyx February 23 2006, 23:32:44 UTC

Ha! I really, really enjoyed this. Snappy dialogue and your Veronica voice in particular was dead-on (though you do great Jackie as well).

amelia_kay February 24 2006, 13:24:40 UTC

Thank you very much! I'm really glad to hear that about the Veronica voice - I wasn't sure if Veronica was a little too strident in this one.

rowanceleste February 23 2006, 23:40:10 UTC

That was perfect! Great story! :)

amelia_kay February 24 2006, 13:24:52 UTC

Woo! Thank you so much =)

serenitysea February 23 2006, 23:43:21 UTC

I liked this!!!

"Who knew. So what about Logan Echolls?"

"You can't be serious."

"Hey, I'd hit it."

"Fair warning: it hits back."

And that was fabu.

Good characterisation, and I loved that it was dialogue only. Good call on that.

amelia_kay February 24 2006, 13:26:09 UTC

Thank you! I was worried about MarySueing Jackie a little in there. OMG she's a sekrit L/V fan girl!!! LOL