VM FIC: The Invisible Girl (Molly Fitzpatrick POV)

May 27, 2006 15:31

TITLE: The Invisible Girl
SERIES: Veronica Mars
AUTHOR: amelia_kay
CHARACTER(S): Molly, Molly/Feelix, Weevil
WORD COUNT: 2,081
SPOILERS: All of S2, but especially Weevil's subplot in "Not Pictured."
SUMMARY: Molly Fitzpatrick has some unfinished business with one Eli Navarro. A post-finale coda. Written for halfway2home's Mix-N-Match challenge.

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amelia_kay May 27 2006, 20:49:23 UTC
Wow really? I thought Molly was a really affecting character on the show, so thank you so much for saying that. :*

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givemehistory May 28 2006, 09:59:54 UTC
Oh, Molly. I just really want her to be okay, and if we never see her on the show again, I'd like to think she's gotten away and she's okay. I think your fic does offer that kind of hope.

Innocence doesn't protect anyone in Neptune.

That should be the slogan for the sherrif's office. *sigh*

I love the interaction; it's gruff like you'd expect, but so terribly tender in some other, almost intangible way. And I like to think about that side of Weevil. I'm feeling the love, oh yes. ♥

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amelia_kay May 28 2006, 16:59:34 UTC
Thank you so much, babe. You always get what I'm trying to do somehow.

I'd like to think she's gotten away and she's okay.

Me, too. She looked so lost and crushed the last time we saw her. I hope she comes back and kicks some ass in S3.

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givemehistory May 28 2006, 19:42:40 UTC
Just reread it, and gosh, the toy bus and everything, it just kills me. *babbles*

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anonymous May 29 2006, 13:48:36 UTC
I love when people write about background characters, especially characters we never (or may never in the future) really got to know. So stories like this one are always very interesting to me. I loved the interaction here between these two, and it feels really natural. They are prehaps the only two people that really loved Felix (do we know anything about his family? I am thinking that people with a good family life don't need to go seek acceptance through a gang...) So it seems very realistic to me that she would go see him in jail and that they would have this convertation. I hurt for them both, and like the person above me I really hope Molly gets away from her family and ends up okay.

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bspalek May 29 2006, 13:49:19 UTC
Whoops, that was me.

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amelia_kay June 5 2006, 15:43:42 UTC
Thank you so much for your awesome comments, B. I, too, love the background characters and I'm glad this story worked for you.

They are prehaps the only two people that really loved Felix (do we know anything about his family? I am thinking that people with a good family life don't need to go seek acceptance through a gang...)

That's exactly what I was thinking. We weren't shown his family grieving at all, and that's odd considering that it was such a high profile case. It really seems like Weevil and Molly were the only ones this profoundly affected.

I really hope Molly gets away from her family and ends up okay.

I really hope so too!

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shealynn88 May 29 2006, 17:38:55 UTC
This was just awesome. It's so nice to see them remembering Felix. I've sort of fallen in love with him post-mortem, and his relationship with Molly. Thanks for writing this!

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amelia_kay June 5 2006, 15:44:14 UTC
You're very welcome!!! I wish there were more Felix fic out there in the world, but what can ya do. =)

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callmesandy July 8 2006, 23:35:48 UTC
Dude, awesome. Seriously.

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amelia_kay August 30 2006, 14:35:24 UTC
Catching up on old comments, most of which LJ didn't send me :(

Anyway, glad you read and liked this. I've been wanting to read and/or write more Molly/Felix lately, but not sure anyone would read it :D

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