New Fic: First Choice Part 2/2

[amelie_n]

Title: First Choice
Fandom: DWP
Pairing: Andy/Miranda
Rating: I have no idea. I suck at ratings! There is swearing, and some mild reference to violence, and not very explicit sex. M, maybe?
Author's Notes: I have finally managed to complete my first DWP fic! I haven't written and completed anything in years, so I'm pretty pleased with myself! Feel

Comments

[another_picture]

hmm...I'm thinking theres the possibly of this story calling out for a sequel...maybe??

I really like how you used the flashbacks to give an insight into Miranda...I'm not sure that I've seen that done before.

Please write more dwp soon.

-x- A-P -x-

[amelie_n]

I don't know about a sequel, to me the story kind of feels finished, but I will definitely be writing more DWP.

I'm glad you liked the flashbacks. It's really fun making up a past for Miranda!

Thank you for your comment!

Amelie

[tanama30]

wow a truly in depth look at miranda's possible past. i loved every minute of it. hope to read more of your work

[amelie_n]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it and took the time to write a comment! I really appreciate it!

There will be more soon!

Amelie

[flitterbug18]

That was good...i liked the flash backs because they built up a past for miranda, and made her character seem more solid. And the way it kinda danced along the edge of cannon with slight alterations here n there worked.

It was brilliant in the way you could empathise with Miranda, understand all her emotions towards her sister, the hate for her being chosen over her in everything but also the guilt and protective nature...family are funny things!

look forward to more from you!! Hugs Flit xxx

[amelie_n]

I'm so glad you liked it!

I was originally not going to stick to canon at all, and set all of it after Paris, but then I decided I'd use the movie, just change it to suit my purposes. I'm glad it wasn't confusing or anything!

Thank you for your lovely comment, it's great to know that people enjoyed it.

Amelie

[abilena]

This was FANTASTIC!!!!!! I loved this story. It was very well written. I liked the glimpses into Miranda's past.

[amelie_n]

Aww, thank you! I'm so glad that you liked it!

Amelie

[ein_myria]

Thank you for writing this! :) Like the others I'll echo the sentiment that this fic is pretty awesome, and adds an element of richness to this genre. ;) Please keep writing!

[amelie_n]

Thank you for reading this! I'm glad that you liked it, and I will definitely keep writing. I didn't realize how much I'd missed it until I started up again.

I really appreciate your comments!

Amelie