New Fic: The Right Time Part 2/2

[amelie_n]

Title: The Right Time
Fandom: DWP
Pairing: Andy/Miranda
Raiting: PG13? There's some swearing, but that's all.
Author's Notes: This is a christmas gift forjesi76082 . For more notes see part 1.

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Comments

[sarmentosa]

Terrific Story

This story left me warm and fuzzy. Bravo!

[amelie_n]

I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for your comment!

Amelie

[charlance]

“Girls. The same rules apply as with Patricia. Only real names. I will not go walking a dog and shout ‘Nutmeg’ after it!”

Loved that part and this whole story. I liked how you gradually worked your way to the reveal of Miranda and Andy's feelings.

Keep up the great work!

[amelie_n]

I'm glad that the build up worked, and that you weren't put off by all the animals!

Thank you for reading!

Amelie

[nicolina04]

See, I told you it was going to be good! And after reading it, I can say that there wouldn't have been much that I'd have been able to do as a Beta anyway! :)

[amelie_n]

I'm really glad you liked it. Still, I'll definitely get you to Beta my next one. It's much more nerve-wracking if no one else has looked at it!

Happy holidays!

Amelie

[vinjii]

You let the dog die :( Poor Patricia!

But Hugo was awesome, I love Hugo.

"She was staring suspiciously at where Hugo had just vanished" had me laughing for a full minute, because I so could imagine the look on her face.

Awesome.

[amelie_n]

Well, Patricia was very old and had a lovely long doggy life!

I'm quite fond of Hugo myself. Somehow, in my mind, Miranda seemed the type to have a secret fear of rodents...

Thank you for taking the time to leave such a nice comment! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Amelie

[abilena]

Poor Patricia.... other than the dog dying, I absolutely loved this story. It was great.

[amelie_n]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. And Patricia was very old, if that helps at all...

Amelie