Titled "so far" - - please critique away

[ameobicdysentry]

Ive made it this far giggling and planning like madman, plotting and planning

Comments

[miss_verucasalt]

i absolutely loved it - especially the first bit. if anything, i would leave out the 'silver and gold' bits, simply because i think the idea is effective enough without them.

<3 your writing!! :)

[lizzymisse]

you need to write more so I can take up more of my time reading it and hence think about writing stuff myself less.