A Time to Love [4/?]

[amerecles]

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Alfred leaned up against the shower wall, letting the water pouring from the showerhead wash over him like cleansing rain. Something in him felt the need to be washed clean, as if he’d done something dirty or sinful. Everything else in his was simply

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[noorter]

I came here to leave you a comment on chapter three, to find you updated again… and I almost scream in delight. Yeah, look at the things you make me confess woman! <3

Aw! And don’t hate the chapter, dear. It was a delicious fill even if the sex is a little rushed. But, hey! They’ve been fighting and bickering for five years now and after every encounter Alfred always got an erection, which must say a lot about some strong UST, non? It was better to resolve their tensions in bed than blowing their cover completely, I think. ;D

I’ll be waiting patiently for you to update. It doesn’t matter how long will it take; you had me hooked with this story from the very first chapter and I will be here always. *Prepares her sleeping bag and some snacks to patiently wait (in a totally not creepy stalker way) in your journal*

Lots of love, dear. I hope to be reading more from you soon! <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3 (yeah, always wait my chain of gay hearts, they show my love! <3)

[amerecles]

-eats all the gay hearts ALL OF THEM-

Oh, their tension is anything but resolved hoo hoo. It's still going to take a lot for them to realize they can stand to be around each other, let alone get along. Not to mention how thick their skulls are when it comes to a relationship beyond that.

And I'll try to have an update done soon, but I'm notoriously bad at updating.

[lifeinaphantasy]

I love it!!! You're doing such a good job!! ♥

I love the characterization of both Ivan and Alfred,
and they way they have this hate/lust relationship
is just fantastic! And of course makes the sex that much
more intense! *fans self* It was delicious! And hey
don't worry about the chapters, I think this is great.
Some people drag the chapters out and then finally put the sex
... maybe I shouldn't be so blunt... The "love making" XD at the end. So I really love how you put it in now. And also it fits the plot well. I mean they are supposed to be undercover and if the people they are impersonating are super duper intense lovers it only makes sense that they'd be the way they are now.

So don't fret, you're doing a really good job!!! And I am soooooo super excited for the next chapter!!! :D ♥