A million years ago, this was a request from
pun, who wanted Derek Jeter/Alex Rodriguez goofing around on an off day before a home stand. (So, in NYC.)
Derek Jeter, Alex Rodriguez
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Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction. It is in no way a reflection on the actual life, behavior, or character of any of the people featured, and there is no
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That was amazing... I felt as if I was really there in the room. A small otherworldly bubble for only them...
Lovely use of language... perfectly paced.
Am now going to read again and again... thank you so much for sharing.
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A small otherworldly bubble for only them
Yes, exactly. I started the fic trying to think of all the things I do when I have a free day in NYC, and then I tried to guess how that would go for someone like Derek Jeter... somehow couldn't see him just wandering a museum or whatever and being left alone, you know? So they kind of need that bubble, at this point in their careers...
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I always love how detailed your fics are. All these little things, like Derek flicking Alex's toes, the inside of his mouth being like a puppy's, the reasoning for only carrying $50 bills. Makes everything feel more believable - all these little quirks that make them more human.
Thanks for sharing!
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A+
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