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Jun 14, 2010 22:08

A million years ago, this was a request from pun, who wanted Derek Jeter/Alex Rodriguez goofing around on an off day before a home stand. (So, in NYC.)

Derek Jeter, Alex Rodriguez
PG
2926 words

Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction. It is in no way a reflection on the actual life, behavior, or character of any of the people featured, and there is no ( Read more... )

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littlestclouds June 16 2010, 04:58:38 UTC
Um, did you just make me go 'Awwwwwwwwww!' over A-Rod and Jeter? I mean, I don't hate the Yankees or anything, but I never imagined I'd want to draw big shiny hearts around these two. I really liked this, though. It works as friendship fic, it works as friendship-but-something-more-possibly fic. Nice.

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americanleaguer June 16 2010, 16:19:02 UTC
Ha, well, I do hate the Yankees and I kind of hated myself for adding to the mass of A-Rod/Jeter fic out there, but I am going to finish these requests, goddammit! Anyways, they're so OTP/life-partner-bff-y in real life, they're actually pretty easy to write that way... probably that's part of why that huge mass of A-Rod/Jeter fic exists.

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slashfictionfan June 16 2010, 14:53:33 UTC
*meep*

That was amazing... I felt as if I was really there in the room. A small otherworldly bubble for only them...

Lovely use of language... perfectly paced.

Am now going to read again and again... thank you so much for sharing.

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americanleaguer June 16 2010, 16:21:47 UTC
Thank you!

A small otherworldly bubble for only them

Yes, exactly. I started the fic trying to think of all the things I do when I have a free day in NYC, and then I tried to guess how that would go for someone like Derek Jeter... somehow couldn't see him just wandering a museum or whatever and being left alone, you know? So they kind of need that bubble, at this point in their careers...

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shizam_i_am June 16 2010, 18:57:07 UTC
omg awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. that was so freaking cute. thanks for sharing!

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americanleaguer June 16 2010, 22:18:19 UTC
Glad you enjoyed it! :)

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deviliknow June 18 2010, 17:39:07 UTC
Ahhh, I like thinking about them like this. Even with years in New York and all the media-stirred craziness, that the two of them would still have this playful brother-like relationship, way too comfortable with each other. And the implied sex too, that doesn't hurt ^_^

I always love how detailed your fics are. All these little things, like Derek flicking Alex's toes, the inside of his mouth being like a puppy's, the reasoning for only carrying $50 bills. Makes everything feel more believable - all these little quirks that make them more human.

Thanks for sharing!

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americanleaguer June 18 2010, 22:27:07 UTC
Thanks! I think here the playful etc. relationship is kind of their buffer from all the media-stirred craziness. ;)

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kidenagain June 22 2010, 04:06:34 UTC
that was like, more adorable than anything. i didn't know adorable like that could exist, about jeter and rodriguez at least. what even. and now i have to go read it again. ♥

A+

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americanleaguer June 24 2010, 20:45:54 UTC
Ha, I don't know, they're so... established? in their togetherness, it made the adorable not that hard to write. Glad you enjoyed it!

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