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Aug 26, 2010 21:16

Basically a PWP. I would say sorry, but I'm not really.

Austin Jackson/Curtis Granderson
NC-17
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Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction. It is in no way a reflection on the actual life, behavior, or character of any of the people featured, and there is no connection or affiliation between this fictional story and the people or ( Read more... )

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littlestclouds August 27 2010, 05:03:30 UTC
"You want the preposition. Not the verb."

I made jazzhands in my mind at that.

I made jazzhands at all of this, really, but mostly Austin's anxious rookieness and Austin inadvertently putting himself in the "wants to fuck Granderson" camp, and the fact that Laird and Santiago are the only ones who notice. Also Verlander being a rat, haha.

I kind of got an "Austin Jackson's official welcome to the big leagues" vibe from this. It was like a rookie initiation, but with a lot more sex. ;)

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americanleaguer August 30 2010, 19:33:40 UTC
In my mind, what I really wanted was Kenny Rogers knowingly grinning off in the corner, but of course he is no more. Like, Max Scherzer doing the same doesn't quite seem as convincing, you know? So it had to be Laird and Santiago.

I saw it as less of a 'welcome to the big leagues' thing and more of a 'welcome to the wonderful world of Curtis Granderson, or at least his spot on the team' kind of thing. ;)

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sinquepida August 28 2010, 01:46:28 UTC
Dude, I love this story. I was waiting to comment because I was going to come up with all of these really intelligent things to say about it but I kept clicking back to the tab all, "HAHA I LOVE IT." So:

HAHA I LOVE IT.

(That is a delighted "HAHA," not a sarcastic one.)

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americanleaguer August 30 2010, 19:34:46 UTC
It's at most a whisper above a PWP, so I don't really think there's anything intelligent to be said about it... I suppose someone could try analyzing the awesome hotness of Granderson and Jackson together... ;)

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owllover711 August 31 2010, 02:42:27 UTC
Oh, damn this is lovely. I know this is lame FB, but...

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americanleaguer September 1 2010, 00:02:22 UTC
Any feedback at all is always appreciated!

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bee_yes August 31 2010, 07:03:19 UTC
I love it. I love Jackson's rookie-ness and how at the beginning he's so afraid to find out what's really in the bottom of his locker. Granderson doesn't show up nearly enough in RPF, and it's a shame. I love that your Granderson is almost predatory in the way that he pursues Jackson but still keeps him calm enough for gay-sexxin. LOL.

And for the record, I would so go gay for Curtis Granderson.

(Even though I am a lady.)

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americanleaguer September 1 2010, 00:02:49 UTC
There is really not enough Granderson fic out there in the world. Like... it is a crime.

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