[Rustbelt] de-ashcanification stage one: I need your eyes!

[americanwizard]

So, I've got a draft of a new Rustbelt text. I'm not happy with it yet, but I don't know what to do to fix it. Specifically, I'm not satisfied with the "Playing the Game" and "GM Guide" chapters. And there's a few other issues that I don't feel I've covered properly, like abstraction and scale in resolution, and how the Rust behaves, and how to use

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[buddha_davis]

Hey Marshall! I'd love to take a look, let me know if you need my PM. I just handed out a copy of Rustbelt to a friend of mine to look over, and your name came up on someone else's design journal, so I dropped a quick link to over here. Specifically, one of my friends mentioned Rustbelt in Jason Godesky's design blog about his game; The Fifth World, over at http://thefifthworldsg.blogspot.com/2009/02/lessons-from-ganakagok.html