Sesame Leaves (rwp #30)

[ametaznes]

when someone drives over the sewer lid

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Sesame Leaves

[ext_104228]

I really like the way you take the sound in the street and personalize it. "Hollow metallic introduction" is a great line.

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[ext_76501]

I like the idea of the home-made world the narrator inhabits, and seems to be just fine with forgetting some things that used to be normal, and making up others to make do. It's a world I almost recognize, but not quite, maybe a metaphor of how we view each other. Great poem, I really like it.