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amethyst_j

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Feb 13, 2007 17:06

This is for bingblot, and everyone else whose patience I've sorely tested.

A Most Advantageous Match
Chapter 10: An Intricate Dance

( Chapter 10: An Intricate Dance )

a most advantageous match

Comments 6

lykeleia February 13 2007, 23:43:55 UTC

NOOO!!! How could you do this?!!!!

Oh, I think I see a vile scheme in our midst... and the villianous perpetrators as well. I dare say, it seems like Mr. Malfoy and Miss Weasley have something awful planned.

And you have absolutely no qualms about torturing us, do you? ;)

But this was a wonderful chapter. Just lovely. I don't know how I'm going to wait for the next one after all that has happened here! ^_^

You have no idea how well this all fits in with a class that I'm taking. It focuses on British female writers in the 18th century... kind of like, Austen's predecessors.

I was just musing today how much your version of Ginny reminds me of a character in the novel. What makes it even better is that she's the younger sister of the hero's best friend! The irony had me grinning from ear to ear. :D

madderbrad February 14 2007, 03:05:36 UTC

You are just one big tease!

demosthenes91 February 14 2007, 03:36:38 UTC

you are a deliciously cruel, my dear, but we do love you so!

*grins*

Another great chapter, and now I'm not only anxiously awaiting them getting together, but a serious comeuppance for the other two... slimy, conniving gits!

mmleadinglady February 14 2007, 04:32:27 UTC

It wouldn't be a romance if there weren't a little conflict - I'm just ready for a little payoff ;) I can't wait for the next part!

sbertie February 14 2007, 20:35:59 UTC

I don't think I've been commenting lately, but I DID want to say how enjoyable this is so far. I read that post about people saying it's taking too long and all, but really, I think that's so silly. I mean, granted, you say this is chapter 10, but they're fairly short chapters, and in the chronology of the story itself, it hasn't been all that long, really. So, from THIS reader at least, I dont think you need to worry about the pacing at all!!

Oh, and I don't know if you know this tidbit or not, but red hair was considered low and vulgar by the really snobby English upper classes at that time. It may be quite hilarious if someone who cared about shit like that made some sort of comment to Ginny about her pride and joy.