I'm so very glad that Hermione finally lost her patience and told her husband a thing or two. I'm also glad Harry responded in the manner he did. It was a perfect follow up to everything that's boiled between them.
I loved the undressing too! I was giggling, but it was also very sensual. The fact that you, and they, were able to break the mood for a moment worked very well. It flowed perfectly, and didn't feel like an interruption at all. And by doing this you made the encounter seem that much more real.
And woah boy, was the smut worth it! :) Beautifully done.
It's very interesting because you can see the differences in this as an H/Hr fic. Because of the time period, it's almost like a different relationship altogether. Having them get married, then slowly draw closer really adds a different, but wonderful twist. I love it.
I can't wait for more. There is more isn't, there? :)
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I'm so very glad that Hermione finally lost her patience and told her husband a thing or two. I'm also glad Harry responded in the manner he did. It was a perfect follow up to everything that's boiled between them.
I loved the undressing too! I was giggling, but it was also very sensual. The fact that you, and they, were able to break the mood for a moment worked very well. It flowed perfectly, and didn't feel like an interruption at all. And by doing this you made the encounter seem that much more real.
And woah boy, was the smut worth it! :) Beautifully done.
It's very interesting because you can see the differences in this as an H/Hr fic. Because of the time period, it's almost like a different relationship altogether. Having them get married, then slowly draw closer really adds a different, but wonderful twist. I love it.
I can't wait for more. There is more isn't, there? :)
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Great job! It felt really natural for them to have a fight and finally get everything out into the open. Awesome! This isn't the end, right?
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And thanks for the comment!
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