Comments | amethyst_j: Something Different; H/Hr; NC-17

amethyst_j

Something Different; H/Hr; NC-17

Sep 15, 2007 19:28

Title: Something Different
Author: amethyst_j
Disclaimer: Harry Potter belongs to J K Rowling. Don't ask me why.
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Sexual content. No spoilers.
Summary: Hermione’s relationship with Harry becomes something different. Written for the hghpficexchange for inell.

( There was something off about him today. )

one-shot

Comments 13

sweet_iolanthe September 16 2007, 02:14:04 UTC

Ohh. it was fantastic.
Hermione was the one to find the feelings last.
The love scene was in her pov. ;]
and the ending was just perfect. very much like them.
i'm glad you're back.
keep up the good work.

amethyst_j September 16 2007, 03:39:31 UTC

*hugs* Thanks!

sweet_iolanthe December 7 2008, 08:19:16 UTC

that is a very lovely piece. ;)

lelymarques September 16 2007, 03:30:48 UTC

omg the cutest harry ever *faints*

amethyst_j September 16 2007, 03:38:22 UTC

Lol, that's because he was heavily Edward Cullen inspired. ;-D

jacyevans September 16 2007, 03:35:40 UTC

Oh, this was even better the second time around. Hermione's insecurities about their relationship becoming something more, Harry being the perfect gentleman until Hermione wants things to go farther... and the sex! GAWD! *fans self*

Can I have a Harry for myself, too? Please?

amethyst_j September 16 2007, 03:40:25 UTC

*hugs* Thank you, dahling.

You can have my Harry if I can have my Edward back. :P

jacyevans September 16 2007, 03:48:25 UTC

...I don't think I have him anymore. Your Edward has left the building :-P I haven't been able to write anything for days, and after writing non-stop at the beginning of the week, this distresses me greatly (as does the fact that I cannot find my copy of "Twilight," but that is another matter entirely). MUSES, WHERE ARE YOU?

...I think Alice and Luna scared them away -_-

whimsicalmuse September 16 2007, 03:55:31 UTC

Loved this! Harry's nervousness was so sweet. I still haven't accepted the last parts of DH or the Epilogue, so I think I'll substitute this in those places.

lykeleia September 16 2007, 17:25:51 UTC

Mmmmm, this was just what I was looking for.

In fact, I would almost go as far as to say that I was going through smut deprivation. :p

Anywho, I really liked this... it was very different, hence the appropriateness of the title. ;P I liked Harry being the confident and sweet iniator, with Hermione becoming suprisingly (and eagerly) enthralled by his advances.

Very nicely done overall.