Just an Ordinary Love Story (that's what we are): Part Six

[amfiguree]

[American Idol] [David Archuleta/David Cook] [PG-13]

OH MY GOD AT LAST. This part was ridiculous to write, just because it was so emotionally (and physically) draining, and asdofkgfsf so, so much love goes out to ssdimes for her generosity. Apparently, my brain was trying to work out the best way to get your 6,000 words to you as soon as possible, bb,

Comments

[rajkumari905]

OH MY GOSH NATALIE I HAVE TO LEAVE IN 4 MINUTES AND I'M SITTING HERE IN MY PAJAMAS BECAUSE I HAVE NO SELF-RESTRAINT AND ALFJIOFJSDFLWKJFOF NATALIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE.

PLACEHOLDER COMMENT.

[epicflailer]

LMFAO, PRI. I AM TICKLED BY THE IDEA OF YOU READING THIS IN YOUR PAJAMAS BUT I AM SORRY IF I MADE YOU LATE. ♥

[rajkumari905]

OKAY. OKAY. OKAY. I AM BACK. AND AND. ALSKDJFOAEIWJFSDOLGIKJAEWIHDSLFKJOAWIHGLSDKJFOIWEJFDSFASF

KISSING.

NATALIE. YOU KNOW KISSING IS MY FAVORITE. FA.VO.RITE. KISSIIIIIIING.

AND. SEX. SEX HAPPENED. LSDKJFAEW MFYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY.

OKAY.

[rajkumari905]

AND NATALIIIIIIIIIIIE. THE SECOND REREAD MADE ME HYPERAWARE OF GLORIOUS THINGS IN YOUR WRITING WHICH MAKES ME WANT TO CRAWL INSIDE YOUR BRAIN AND HIDE THEIR FOREVER. /CREEP

[therealesther]

whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat.

oh my heck, what happens next? O_O

and i'm so confused, the last few paragraphs felt like a timeskip or a fast forward or something. so, the wedding hasn't happened yet? or has it?

but you know, awesome story and hot making out scenes are hot.

i'm just confuuuuuuuuuuused about the timeline...and dying for the next chapter, ngl. :D

[epicflailer]

no, the wedding hasn't happened. it's a little bit of a timeskip, yes, just a couple of days forward! :)

thank you for r&ring!

[clover71]

i flailed so hard when i saw this post that i fell off my chair.

this is one of my most favoritest cookleta fic ever and ever. omigosh, i love that things had gone deeper (no pun intended) between cook and archie. that bedroom scene... ugh. and the picnic and the dancing and cook-buying-chocolates-for-jazzy, they're all perfect.

but... but... why do i have a feeling cook will run into michael at the deli? no, no, no, no, no, please no.

someone slap me before i get carried away with my imagination.

[pleia1204]

I have the same feeling... Michael, leave Cookie alone! >:(

On the other hand, we have David's eureka moment to tide us over until the next chapter <333

[epicflailer]

BWAHAHAHAHA CHRIS. <3

i am so glad you're still enjoying this, and while i can't give away the story, thank you SO MUCH for the lovely comment, bb!

i'll try not to make you wait too long to find out if you're right! >:DD

[eeitgr]

You have no idea how excited I was when I saw this had been posted. I love this fic like crazy; the concept seems super original to me and the way you write it makes it seem so real to me. I love your Cook on this. And your Archie too but for very different reasons haha.

I wanted to smack someone on the bachelorette party scene until the bedroom scene happened and then I was like :D!!!! (I still wanted to smack those girls but at least some good came out of them being so rude haha)

Why do I get the feeling things are about to go terribly wrong? ): If Michael does something I swear I will rage, I don't care how much I like RL Michael.

Also, Jazzy and Claudia = <<<<<<<3333333333333.

PS: I cannot wait for more!

[epicflailer]

heeee! oh my gosh, thank you so much! i wish i could take credit for the ideas in this one, but it's really just a mish-mash of stolen plot from the movie the wedding date, and this awesome fic version of it done j2 style!

i'm SO glad you're enjoying this, though! and hopefully you don't rage too hard when the rest of the story comes out! <3

[epicflailer]

hee, tysm!