This is what happens when you decide to do your own obvious santa fic exchange with bubbleforest but end up not finishing in time. I LOVE YOU METTEKINS~
Natalie, oh my god. I've read this three times now and I love it more dearly every single time (also I SEE YOUR EDITS LADY. :DDDDD) The second time I tried to copy and paste all the lines I loved until I had a Notepad documents basically as long as the full story and I was like WELL THEN. !!!!!
I cannot believe you're writing something so completely PERFECT for me. The way the story unfolds is magical, how you don't get presented with the full puzzle in the beginning but it all pieces together gradually, unf. UNF. I bow down to you, I am not worthy, IT'S ALL SO PLEASING MY STOMACH IS SQUIRMING IN HAPPINESS.
Howie and Brian are perfect, what are you trying to do to meeee??? With their precious ease with each other and how much they clearly love each other and omg. You had me when Brian just full-on charged ahead with his "can we talk about why you don't like me?" like THAT'S MY BEAUTIFUL BRIAN RIGHT THERE. And he's SO calm, and SO understanding, and so secure in where he stands with Howie, like. Fuck. A kink I didn't even know I had
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They made me split my comment in two, can you BELIEVEbubbleforestDecember 25 2016, 18:50:59 UTC
Howie regrets coming in to work at all. “Good morning,” he ventures, already thinking of the way Brian had leaned into him that morning, pressing soft, open-mouthed kisses down the side of Howie’s neck.
“Stay,” Brian had murmured. “The world isn’t going to end today, I promise.”
Howie should have listened.
NNNNNNNNNNGAH. Like, they're so domestic, but they're so hot in their domesticity. MY HEAR. MY SEMI-BIONIC HEART, IT CAN'T DEAL.
Before Howie can reply, Justin slams a stack of documents on his table. “You’re wide awake! For the last fucking time, Howie’s getting married, it’s happening, can we please move on.”
I love this I love this I love this. It so beautifully conveys Justin's feelings without ever stating anything. You do that SO many times here and I'm so in awe of you. TEACH ME, SENPAI.
AJ waggles his eyebrows. “So who proposed? Was it romantic? When is this happening? And who's planning this shindig anyway? I have the city's best event planners on speed dial
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Re: They made me split my comment in two, can you BELIEVEepicflailerDecember 26 2016, 06:50:49 UTC
OMG METTE LOOK AT THIS DELIGHTFUL COMMENT I CANNOT EVEN HANDLE YOU AND THIS AMAZING FEEDBACK SFJSDGOIJSDG I'M SO PLEASED YOU'RE ENJOYING IT CAN I JUST SAY :D :D :D :D :D
i'm going to refrain from saying too much more in case i inadvertently give anything away and it detracts from the ~intrigue~ you are finding in this story at this point. just know that EVERY WORD OF THIS FEEDBACK MADE ME SO PLEASED AND GOOGLY-EYED AND YOU ARE THE LOVELIEST RECIPIENT YOU ARE THE ONLY RECIPIENT I EVER WANT TO HAVE AGAIN.
I CAN'T WAIT TO GET CRACKING ON THE REST OF IT SO YOU HAVE A COMPLETED GIFT!! ♥
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I cannot believe you're writing something so completely PERFECT for me. The way the story unfolds is magical, how you don't get presented with the full puzzle in the beginning but it all pieces together gradually, unf. UNF. I bow down to you, I am not worthy, IT'S ALL SO PLEASING MY STOMACH IS SQUIRMING IN HAPPINESS.
Howie and Brian are perfect, what are you trying to do to meeee??? With their precious ease with each other and how much they clearly love each other and omg. You had me when Brian just full-on charged ahead with his "can we talk about why you don't like me?" like THAT'S MY BEAUTIFUL BRIAN RIGHT THERE. And he's SO calm, and SO understanding, and so secure in where he stands with Howie, like. Fuck. A kink I didn't even know I had ( ... )
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“Stay,” Brian had murmured. “The world isn’t going to end today, I promise.”
Howie should have listened.
NNNNNNNNNNGAH. Like, they're so domestic, but they're so hot in their domesticity. MY HEAR. MY SEMI-BIONIC HEART, IT CAN'T DEAL.
Before Howie can reply, Justin slams a stack of documents on his table. “You’re wide awake! For the last fucking time, Howie’s getting married, it’s happening, can we please move on.”
I love this I love this I love this. It so beautifully conveys Justin's feelings without ever stating anything. You do that SO many times here and I'm so in awe of you. TEACH ME, SENPAI.
AJ waggles his eyebrows. “So who proposed? Was it romantic? When is this happening? And who's planning this shindig anyway? I have the city's best event planners on speed dial ( ... )
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i'm going to refrain from saying too much more in case i inadvertently give anything away and it detracts from the ~intrigue~ you are finding in this story at this point. just know that EVERY WORD OF THIS FEEDBACK MADE ME SO PLEASED AND GOOGLY-EYED AND YOU ARE THE LOVELIEST RECIPIENT YOU ARE THE ONLY RECIPIENT I EVER WANT TO HAVE AGAIN.
I CAN'T WAIT TO GET CRACKING ON THE REST OF IT SO YOU HAVE A COMPLETED GIFT!! ♥
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