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Fractured Fairy Tales, SGA, R, McKay/Sheppard

Nov 25, 2005 03:29

Title: Fractured Fairy Tales
Author: Amireal
Rating: R
Pairing: McKay/Sheppard
Spoilers: THE HIVE!! This is Pre and Post Ep fic!
Beta: chopchica Weee! Thank you! Despite the fact that you secretly wished for me to write this fic even as I refused. And by secretly wished I mean was all "WRITE ME POST-EP FIC NOW, BITCH!!" Curse you. And to seperis who bitchslapped ( Read more... )

mckay/sheppard, sga

Comments 95

jo_zed_pee_em November 25 2005, 11:50:37 UTC

WOW!! *kisses you!* Thank you so much for this!! John appologising to Rodney for forgetting about him was brilliant....and should have been done on the show!

I just loved everything about this....especially THE BEGINNING at the end.... *tilts head* if that makes sense! :) *Big Applause!*

amireal December 19 2005, 01:31:36 UTC

Makes perfect sense. *nods*.

Thanks for the feedback!

lainy122 November 25 2005, 11:54:26 UTC

This was so awesome! ^_^ It's exactly what I was thinking of when I watched the episode, only much more succinct and interjected with poignant fairy tale analogies *g* Loved it!

amireal December 19 2005, 01:32:14 UTC

*grins* YAY!

marici November 25 2005, 11:56:09 UTC

Cute story! Did you write the interpolations, too? I very much appreciate the way this story wraps things up from the character's points of view, instead of just the audience's. Thanks!

amireal December 19 2005, 01:33:03 UTC

Yep, I wrote the meta as well. My brain cried. Really. ;)

You're welcome!

eclectify November 25 2005, 12:01:07 UTC

*bows and worships*

You are seriously a master storyteller. I am just...trying to find the words to say how much I LOVED this but am coming up lacking.

amireal December 19 2005, 01:33:39 UTC

Master story teller? *meep*

Thank you!

sweeneybird November 25 2005, 12:05:12 UTC

"Rodney wants to be Xena, all calm and collected, every move judicious and logical, the minimalist approach, every Karate chop in its place and he wants to look hot doing it. Of course, he ends up being Joxer on steroids and he's really not all that surprised."

First of all, what a lovely writing style you have! This was great. Second, the above might be the funniest and most astute insight into Rodney that I've read. Thanks for sharing.

amireal December 19 2005, 01:37:39 UTC

Sadly, I wanted him to look a little less goofy, but not by far. It really reminded me of the cinematography of some of the goofier Xena fights. And Rodney is a total WHORE, so of course he wants to look hot doing it.

I'm glad you enjoyed this fic so much, thanks for responding!