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seperis January 8 2006, 06:16:11 UTC
*sulks* the world does not end when I write past tense. except in that one story. And that was a long time ago.

I like the commentary!

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mecurtin January 8 2006, 17:51:20 UTC
This probably explains a lot of the big clunky belt-buckles some guys wear.

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namastenancy January 8 2006, 06:43:01 UTC
The commentary was fascinating. I like how you worked this out, the back and forth between the two men, JohnCluless and Rodney - well, Rodney being Rodney.

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bluebrocade January 8 2006, 07:38:48 UTC
Fantastic story and thanks so much for the commentary. It's so fascinating to read about the author's process.

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sparktastic January 8 2006, 19:44:18 UTC
That was fascinating to read, thank you! I do so much of my writing completely on an instinctual level, I'd find it hard to justify as many of my choices as you've done yours.

Also, this is a wonderful fic. I am a reality-hor myself, and I appreciate very much how you've handled John's coming to terms with what he has and what he wants with Rodney.

Marvellous.

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