Comments | amific: Fic: Blowjob Clause, SGA, NC-17, McKay/Sheppard, 1/1

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Fic: Blowjob Clause, SGA, NC-17, McKay/Sheppard, 1/1

Jun 21, 2006 17:13

Title: Blowjob Clause
Author: Amireal
Rating: NC-17, ~500 words
A/N: Really, seriously, I don't write PWPs. I don't. But since z_rayne has managed to blame two stories on me in under 24 hours, I have decided to blame this on her. Since she beta'd, I feel fully okay with this. This is sort of a warm up, getting back in the game. Moving isn't done, but by ( Read more... )

mckay/sheppard, sga, fic

Comments 121

bwah! logovo June 21 2006, 22:51:31 UTC

"What?" Rodney pushes up onto his elbows, looking flushed and glassy-eyed and really fucking delicious. "Like you didn't see this coming."

Priceless!

This was fun, yay!!

Re: bwah! amireal June 21 2006, 22:59:59 UTC

*grins* Thank you!

I admit it though, I totally abuse that canon line. *feels shameful*

Re: bwah! logovo June 21 2006, 23:12:17 UTC

But it works well in a short fic like this.

wetdryvac June 21 2006, 23:00:45 UTC

Good short. What's a PWP?

And, "Blowjob clause," Made my coffee escape.

amireal June 21 2006, 23:02:55 UTC

PWP, Plot? What Plot?

*grins* Yay for bad jokes!

springwoof June 21 2006, 23:34:21 UTC

Ha! is it okay to say that i found this kind of cute and endearing?

amireal June 21 2006, 23:36:51 UTC

I suppose so. The boys being boys is always kinda endearing.

springwoof June 22 2006, 00:59:43 UTC

'zactly!

But wow. Blowjob.

hee!

volari June 22 2006, 00:40:14 UTC

Hee, absolutely adorable and incredibly hot. I'm so thrilled to see you writing again! I'm also glad that you've gotten settled enough that you're able to find the time to write again. It's good that the Move has calmed down some.

I can't even begin to pick my favorite lines from this though; I agree with all the ones mentioned in the comments above--but really, the entire thing was great fun. John's "confused-but-hey!-blowjob!" perspective is fantastic, along with Rodney's--ok, I can't think how to classify it but it's definately Rodney.

Yayness!

amireal June 22 2006, 00:45:18 UTC

I'm sort of at a mini standstill. Wait till the bedroom furniture comes in. :)

There's other, larger bits in the works, but it still may be a bit slow. *grin* I'm glad you liked the whole thing, thanks!

hth_the_first June 22 2006, 01:29:59 UTC

Dude, of COURSE he didn't see it coming! In fact, I read the whole story thinking, "And of course he didn't see it coming..." *g*

Oh, John. The happy surprises that await you when you're an idiot, and yet totally fucking adorable! And the happy surprises that await me, because, best fandom ever! Thank you. Did I mention this rocks?

amireal June 22 2006, 01:37:40 UTC

I have to admit... I totally abuse that canon line more than once. But it's so precious... and *true*.

*grins* Yay for validation! I mean. I'm glad you liked it!