SGA: Everything Except Temptation, SGA, NC-17, McKay/Sheppard, 1/1

[amific]

Title: Everything Except Temptation
Author: amireal with large contributions from everagaby.
Rating: NC-17, ~4200 words
Pairing: McKay/Sheppard
A/N: Dedicated to z_rayne who is doing nefarious things in exchange for porn. *koff* Also beta'd by z_rayne. Complete coincidence. I swear.

Summary: "Are you kicking me out of my own room?"

Comments

[wetdryvac]

Say, that's a really nice pace to that one! Very well structured.

Bugger. Now I want a sandwich.

[amireal]

Okay I'm just tired enough that my brain supplied a different element of the fic before I got to the last word of the sentence.

*looks shifty*

Glad you liked! Most I've written in UNDER FIVE HOURS in a while.

God my fingers hurt.

[wetdryvac]

*thinks about the various fic elements that could have been substituted*

*sneezes*

Because sandwiches are the safest element there, you know? And they're tasty.

*carefully pats the other fic elements on the head*

That's a five hour writing? Nice!

[_inbetween_]

Ah, yes :) You won't be surprised to hear how good it is to see John himself and then the team defend the not!slut. Very nice throughout.

[amireal]

I uh... had a characterization meltdown a few days ago. *koff*

It was messy, and hentai fic was the result. *looks shifty*

As you can see, I feel better now. *cheerful!*

Thanks!

[enname]

*stares*
How did you manage to hit all my kinks simultaneously there? No, seriously, how? I may have burned my dinner by stopping to read this. Three times.
*awe*

Perhaps some more coherent feedback should be given? Rodney's voice is beautiful throughout, a lovely mixture of snarky, arrogant but also missing some rather vitally important social cues. Only it isn't overt and so we aren't being bludgeoned by either overly compassionate Rodney or almost autistic Rodney. Just. Yeah.

"Go. Away." He says it in the best impression of Ronon he can muster.

This, is just the best image ever. Hunched over with a coat in his lap and a PDA. Apart from the 'yay' Rodney thing, it's just a lovely bit of juxtaposition.

I'll shutup now :)

[amireal]

Re kinks: There's this moment where I've got John all hot and bothered and *desperate* (becacuse you know. Hot.) and I was sort of *flail* and then *bam* this image hit me of the next story element and that as we say is that.

But yeah. I uh, well, maybe we have the same kinks?

Also, OMG POOR DINNER! *pets it*

Yeah, I'm pretty fond of that image too.

Thanks!

[enname]

That image of John being all hot and *desperate* has been haunting me for days and I am going to blame you fully for putting it there. I can't concentrate! The fact that he was hot and desperate for pages is ... yes.

*scrapes self off floor*

We may have similar kinks. :)

*stares at the pot* Dinner was well and truly defunct.

[bibliotech]

Okay, this was just...oh, yay. So much yay. All kinds of good.

[amireal]

Woo!
Thanks!

[starrylizard]

I just love that the team are defending Sheppard, that they know he isn't like that. It's refreshing, considering the number of fics I've read that take the Kirk thing to the extreme.

I alos love the image of Rodney waiting outside and scaring away the girl...and of course the snuggling. So cute! Thank you. :D

[amireal]

Er... I had a characterization melt down... and a lot of my fic is um... reactionary. *looks shifty*

Thank you!

And yeah, Rodney would make the bestest door jam ever.