Comments | amific: SGA: Everything Except Temptation, SGA, NC-17, McKay/Sheppard, 1/1

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SGA: Everything Except Temptation, SGA, NC-17, McKay/Sheppard, 1/1

Jul 06, 2006 04:12

Title: Everything Except Temptation
Author: amireal with large contributions from everagaby.
Rating: NC-17, ~4200 words
Pairing: McKay/Sheppard
A/N: Dedicated to z_rayne who is doing nefarious things in exchange for porn. *koff* Also beta'd by z_rayne. Complete coincidence. I swear.

Summary: "Are you kicking me out of my own room?"

( Everything Except Temptation )

mckay/sheppard, sga, fic

Comments 161

melagan July 6 2006, 14:01:59 UTC

Excellent!

amireal July 6 2006, 16:18:39 UTC

Woo!

cereta July 6 2006, 14:07:23 UTC

I really enjoyed that. The team aspects are wonderful, and I just love Rodney, here.

amireal July 6 2006, 16:20:25 UTC

*huggles Rodney* Me too. :)

Thank you!

turtlespeaks July 6 2006, 15:20:15 UTC

Eee! I love it! Also, this has to be the first fic I have ever read that had someone drugged and not taken advantage of. But I do love how Rodney's voice was getting to John, nice touch, really hot. :)

Poor John, everyone is trying to have sex with you. What do you bet John is never going to drink anything off world again. . . hell, he might turn Moody and start oly drinking from his canteen even on Atlantis.

It's short and sweet and funny. Great job!

amireal July 6 2006, 16:22:44 UTC

Rodney's voice would get *me*. *koff*

Oh no, let's not start those John Sheppard = Harry Potter rumors again.

Hee! Thanks!

pentapus July 6 2006, 15:28:44 UTC

Loved this. I was adding mental angry cheers to the team's individual outrages at the attempted rape. And John giving in for one kiss, but then waiting... was so hot and sweet. And John's "don't ever change" comments = SQUEE. A whole lot of little things about the circumstances and her dad's reaction and also the way the characters were all in character made something that could be a fandom cliche (sex drugs) into something that felt very real and satisfying. And not just the part where Rodney didn't rape him instead of Leela (I had a moment of full body wince before I told myself, "no, no, amireal, keep reading, either it won't happen or she'll covince you there's a reason why").

amireal July 6 2006, 16:28:21 UTC

*is awed at your faith in me*

Personally, I find fighting it a lot hotter than giving in anyway.

Yay! In character! I try. I do.

Thanks!

rrrosa July 6 2006, 15:31:15 UTC

That was...unexpectedly sweet. And fierce!Rodney. Mmmmmmmm.

amireal July 6 2006, 16:28:38 UTC

mmm. Yes.

thank you!